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		<title>By: wilson</title>
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		<dc:creator>wilson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Apr 2009 10:27:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A writing without heart is soulless and it&#039;s nothing but a wasting of time. Jamie, from your writing style, I bet you&#039;re a person that full with passion!

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;wilson&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://willyoumind.blogspot.com/2009/04/you-shouldnt-fasting-even-youre-having.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;You Shouldn’t Fasting Even You’re Having Diarrhea!&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A writing without heart is soulless and it&#8217;s nothing but a wasting of time. Jamie, from your writing style, I bet you&#8217;re a person that full with passion!</p>
<p><abbr><em>wilson&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://willyoumind.blogspot.com/2009/04/you-shouldnt-fasting-even-youre-having.html" rel="nofollow">You Shouldn’t Fasting Even You’re Having Diarrhea!</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Meryl K. Evans</title>
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		<dc:creator>Meryl K. Evans</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Apr 2009 02:36:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jamie, thank you for putting your story and critique out there for all of us to see and experience with you. If only I could think of a children&#039;s story and then I can put myself in your shoes.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Meryl K. Evans&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/MerylsNotes/~3/fN_If36Aat0/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Writer Doesn’t Get Twitter&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jamie, thank you for putting your story and critique out there for all of us to see and experience with you. If only I could think of a children&#8217;s story and then I can put myself in your shoes.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Meryl K. Evans&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/MerylsNotes/~3/fN_If36Aat0/" rel="nofollow">Writer Doesn’t Get Twitter</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Jamie Grove</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jamie Grove</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:57:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Karen I tweeted a tiny bit of the quote below from W. Somerset Maugham.  I think it is apt to include it here on this post.

&lt;blockquote&gt;
It is acknowledged that the technique of painting and of musical composition can only be acquired by assiduous labour, and the productions of dilettantes are rightly regarded with good-humoured or exasperated contempt.  We all congratulate ourselves that the radio and the gramophone have driven from our drawing-rooms the amateur pianist and the amateur singer.  The technique of writing is no less difficult than that of the other arts and yet, because he can read and write a letter, there is a notion that anyone can write well enough to write a book.  Writing seems now the favourite relaxation of the human race.  Whole families will take to it as in happier times they entered religious houses.  Women will write novels to while away their pregnancies; bored noblemen, axed officers, retired civil servants, fly to the pen as one might fly to the bottle.  There is an impression abroad that everyone has it in him to write a book; but if by this is implied a good book the impression is false.  It is true that the amateur may sometimes produce a work of merit.  By a lucky chance he may have a natural facility for writing well, he may have had experiences that are in themselves interesting, or he may have a charming or quaint personality that his very inexpertness helps him to get down on the printed page.  But let him remember that the saying asserts only that everyone has it in him to write one book; it says nothing about a second.  The amateur is wise not to try his luck again.  His next book is pretty sure to be worthless.
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~ W. Somerset Maugham &lt;u&gt;The Summing Up&lt;/u&gt; 1938

Not exactly motivational quote for the first time writer, but an instructive bit of commentary for the would-be writer.  The first book can be quite easy, just by the mere fact that one is unaware of mechanics.  The second book is much harder.

This popped into my head on reading your comment, mainly the last sentence: &quot;I am once again trying to find that balance of blissful ignorance and structured composition.&quot;

I think that no matter how experienced the writer, one is always searching for this sense of blissful ignorance.  Even Mr. Maugham.

Keep searching!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Karen I tweeted a tiny bit of the quote below from W. Somerset Maugham.  I think it is apt to include it here on this post.</p>
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It is acknowledged that the technique of painting and of musical composition can only be acquired by assiduous labour, and the productions of dilettantes are rightly regarded with good-humoured or exasperated contempt.  We all congratulate ourselves that the radio and the gramophone have driven from our drawing-rooms the amateur pianist and the amateur singer.  The technique of writing is no less difficult than that of the other arts and yet, because he can read and write a letter, there is a notion that anyone can write well enough to write a book.  Writing seems now the favourite relaxation of the human race.  Whole families will take to it as in happier times they entered religious houses.  Women will write novels to while away their pregnancies; bored noblemen, axed officers, retired civil servants, fly to the pen as one might fly to the bottle.  There is an impression abroad that everyone has it in him to write a book; but if by this is implied a good book the impression is false.  It is true that the amateur may sometimes produce a work of merit.  By a lucky chance he may have a natural facility for writing well, he may have had experiences that are in themselves interesting, or he may have a charming or quaint personality that his very inexpertness helps him to get down on the printed page.  But let him remember that the saying asserts only that everyone has it in him to write one book; it says nothing about a second.  The amateur is wise not to try his luck again.  His next book is pretty sure to be worthless.
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<p>~ W. Somerset Maugham <u>The Summing Up</u> 1938</p>
<p>Not exactly motivational quote for the first time writer, but an instructive bit of commentary for the would-be writer.  The first book can be quite easy, just by the mere fact that one is unaware of mechanics.  The second book is much harder.</p>
<p>This popped into my head on reading your comment, mainly the last sentence: &#8220;I am once again trying to find that balance of blissful ignorance and structured composition.&#8221;</p>
<p>I think that no matter how experienced the writer, one is always searching for this sense of blissful ignorance.  Even Mr. Maugham.</p>
<p>Keep searching!</p>
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		<title>By: Karen Swim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen Swim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:16:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jamie, I have never had a critique so reading these excerpts were a delight. It&#039;s funny I am finally editing my NaNo novel and was pleasantly surprised that now that the rush of writing my first novel has waned I really do like the story. I happened on a few other pieces written during that time and found myself wondering where THAT writer has been hiding. The freedom and sense of play was so evident. I think the struggle is the more we learn and attempt to improve we may polish the playfulness away. I am once again trying to find that balance of blissful ignorance and structured composition.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Karen Swim&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/WordsForHire/~3/-HA2PJuEkZ8/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;It’s April and I am the Fool&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jamie, I have never had a critique so reading these excerpts were a delight. It&#8217;s funny I am finally editing my NaNo novel and was pleasantly surprised that now that the rush of writing my first novel has waned I really do like the story. I happened on a few other pieces written during that time and found myself wondering where THAT writer has been hiding. The freedom and sense of play was so evident. I think the struggle is the more we learn and attempt to improve we may polish the playfulness away. I am once again trying to find that balance of blissful ignorance and structured composition.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Karen Swim&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/WordsForHire/~3/-HA2PJuEkZ8/" rel="nofollow">It’s April and I am the Fool</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Delighted Scribbler</title>
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		<dc:creator>Delighted Scribbler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Mar 2009 16:38:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have no idea if I&#039;m getting to the heart of things. I don&#039;t even know if I&#039;m really taking risks. LOL! So there you have it, another client for Brain Harvest. Great post.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Delighted Scribbler&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogspot/DSSP/~3/HCnDZdB7vyk/chatchphrase.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Chatchphrase&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have no idea if I&#8217;m getting to the heart of things. I don&#8217;t even know if I&#8217;m really taking risks. LOL! So there you have it, another client for Brain Harvest. Great post.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Delighted Scribbler&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/blogspot/DSSP/~3/HCnDZdB7vyk/chatchphrase.html" rel="nofollow">Chatchphrase</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Jamie Grove</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jamie Grove</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Mar 2009 02:16:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Katie Well, I hope you get started! Thanks for stopping in!

@Scott Oh my, doesn&#039;t that sound like me, but you have a great point, my friend.  Something to focus on. 2010 it is!!!

@Dr. Mani Sometimes it&#039;s also going back to something you did in the past.  While I was working through this idea, I went back and rewrote my notes to the riskiest story I ever penned.  I might share it here some day, but let me say that just the idea of the story got me fired up a bit.  Thanks for dropping in.  Hope you come back again!

@Alex You&#039;re welcome!  Glad to be of assistance! :)


@Joanna Aww, you picked one of my favorites there.  I hope to be able to infuse that kind of energy into my writing again.  There&#039;s a deep purpose in an image like that.  No one can say it lacks heart, can they?  Well, the one guy clearly has a hole in his but you catch my meaning. ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Katie Well, I hope you get started! Thanks for stopping in!</p>
<p>@Scott Oh my, doesn&#8217;t that sound like me, but you have a great point, my friend.  Something to focus on. 2010 it is!!!</p>
<p>@Dr. Mani Sometimes it&#8217;s also going back to something you did in the past.  While I was working through this idea, I went back and rewrote my notes to the riskiest story I ever penned.  I might share it here some day, but let me say that just the idea of the story got me fired up a bit.  Thanks for dropping in.  Hope you come back again!</p>
<p>@Alex You&#8217;re welcome!  Glad to be of assistance! <img src='http://www.hownottowrite.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>@Joanna Aww, you picked one of my favorites there.  I hope to be able to infuse that kind of energy into my writing again.  There&#8217;s a deep purpose in an image like that.  No one can say it lacks heart, can they?  Well, the one guy clearly has a hole in his but you catch my meaning. <img src='http://www.hownottowrite.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Mar 2009 21:08:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jamie, this is such an interesting, honest response to the critiques.  Good on you.

My guess is that there&#039;s a dynamic that goes on between the risk-taking, raw, straight from the heart stuff... then learning more of the craft, the skill, the things you need to learn so that when you move into the next phase you bring them both together, and sock us between the eyes.

Something about your post reminded me of this, which has haunted me all weekend.  Something to do with the wounds we carry in our hearts.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/jamiegrove/3381428514/in/set-72157615829487088/

It&#039;s all there Jamie, and come out it will.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Joanna Young&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/ConfidentWriting/~3/PrV3WelsxSg/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Heroes, Ripple Effects and Community&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jamie, this is such an interesting, honest response to the critiques.  Good on you.</p>
<p>My guess is that there&#8217;s a dynamic that goes on between the risk-taking, raw, straight from the heart stuff&#8230; then learning more of the craft, the skill, the things you need to learn so that when you move into the next phase you bring them both together, and sock us between the eyes.</p>
<p>Something about your post reminded me of this, which has haunted me all weekend.  Something to do with the wounds we carry in our hearts.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jamiegrove/3381428514/in/set-72157615829487088/" rel="nofollow">http://www.flickr.com/photos/jamiegrove/3381428514/in/set-72157615829487088/</a></p>
<p>It&#8217;s all there Jamie, and come out it will.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Joanna Young&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/ConfidentWriting/~3/PrV3WelsxSg/" rel="nofollow">Heroes, Ripple Effects and Community</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Alex Fayle &#124; Someday Syndrome</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Fayle &#124; Someday Syndrome</dc:creator>
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		<description>Wow! Good for you for opening up and putting your critiques online like this. I love how you describe a good critique. I&#039;ll keep it in mind next time I do a critique for someone.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Alex Fayle &#124; Someday Syndrome&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/SomedaySyndrome/~3/7oc3WWbR_eQ/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Fear of an office job: Allison Day interview&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow! Good for you for opening up and putting your critiques online like this. I love how you describe a good critique. I&#8217;ll keep it in mind next time I do a critique for someone.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Alex Fayle | Someday Syndrome&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/SomedaySyndrome/~3/7oc3WWbR_eQ/" rel="nofollow">Fear of an office job: Allison Day interview</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Dr.Mani</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dr.Mani</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Mar 2009 03:24:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jamie, I found your blog because I&#039;m writing a fiction novel.

That&#039;s taking a risk - for me.

For 14 years, I&#039;ve written about business and heart defects - both areas in which I&#039;m an &quot;expert&quot;.  But like your thoughts about your writing, I began feeling that the spark of excitement and daring that infused what I did early on was dimming - even disappearing.

This &#039;risk&#039; was to rekindle that fire of excitement, doing something different, trying something &#039;new&#039;.

So far, it has been exciting - and the sense of adventure has revived a lot of the other work I do too.

Thanks for sharing that experience, and for listening to mine :)

All success
Dr.Mani</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jamie, I found your blog because I&#8217;m writing a fiction novel.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s taking a risk &#8211; for me.</p>
<p>For 14 years, I&#8217;ve written about business and heart defects &#8211; both areas in which I&#8217;m an &#8220;expert&#8221;.  But like your thoughts about your writing, I began feeling that the spark of excitement and daring that infused what I did early on was dimming &#8211; even disappearing.</p>
<p>This &#8216;risk&#8217; was to rekindle that fire of excitement, doing something different, trying something &#8216;new&#8217;.</p>
<p>So far, it has been exciting &#8211; and the sense of adventure has revived a lot of the other work I do too.</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing that experience, and for listening to mine <img src='http://www.hownottowrite.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>All success<br />
Dr.Mani</p>
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		<title>By: Scott Baker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scott Baker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Mar 2009 01:48:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jaimie,

I&#039;m glad you got your $ worth.  I have the same problem, writing stories that come to me with nothing to say.  I sometimes try to find some aspect of human nature to write about only to discover the human nature part vanished.  

I try writing stories starting with the theme, but that seldom works for me.  It works better when I start with two opposing opinions and have the characters (directly or indirectly) argue them out, usually to a stalemate.  One idea lays out too much of the path and story seems false.  Two ideas give me somewhere to go.  I have quite a few of those stories lying unfinished.

If you&#039;re like me, you&#039;re taking risks, they&#039;re just the wrong risks.  Maybe that gives us both someplace to focus.

Keep it up.  Seattle, 2010.  You and me.
-Oso

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Scott Baker&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://osomuerte.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/glow-baby-update/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Glow Baby update&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jaimie,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad you got your $ worth.  I have the same problem, writing stories that come to me with nothing to say.  I sometimes try to find some aspect of human nature to write about only to discover the human nature part vanished.  </p>
<p>I try writing stories starting with the theme, but that seldom works for me.  It works better when I start with two opposing opinions and have the characters (directly or indirectly) argue them out, usually to a stalemate.  One idea lays out too much of the path and story seems false.  Two ideas give me somewhere to go.  I have quite a few of those stories lying unfinished.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re like me, you&#8217;re taking risks, they&#8217;re just the wrong risks.  Maybe that gives us both someplace to focus.</p>
<p>Keep it up.  Seattle, 2010.  You and me.<br />
-Oso</p>
<p><abbr><em>Scott Baker&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://osomuerte.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/glow-baby-update/" rel="nofollow">Glow Baby update</a></em></abbr></p>
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